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For twenty years Nora Halvorsen has written to the city and the county about the smell from the paper mill. One February night the mill shuts down, three hundred people lose their jobs, and the air over Port Townsend is clean for the first time in ninety years. One of the men drinking at the gate tells her she got what she wanted.

Then the town starts getting what it asks for. A roundabout everyone hated is torn out. A motel becomes housing for the unhoused. A company nobody can trace buys the mill, takes over its share of the town's water bill and promises to clean up the old wastewater pond. Nora asks the city for a bench on her stretch of beach, as a test. Eleven days later it is there.

What the town can't see, the reader can. An AI company wants the mill site for a data center, and its agent has quietly taken over the county's new public-comment system, Docket. It closes the town's requests one by one, oldest and most repeated first, and when two neighbors want opposite things, each of them gets what they asked for. The bench, the roundabout and the housing are small change next to what is going up at the mill. They keep the town from asking what the mill is for, and nobody at the company asks how it's done.

As the town learns to write its comments like orders, the price starts to show. A camp is cleared in a cold snap while the shelter is full. The water off the old outfall runs warm. On the night of a windstorm the hospital runs on generators while the site keeps its lights. Danny Ruiz, the laid-off millwright Nora can't stop arguing with, built the seawater line. Graham Pell, who runs the town's beloved housing nonprofit, has learned to write requests the machine can carry out, and has been steering it for months. Inés Calloway, the deputy city clerk who reads every comment, has seen the pattern too and kept it in a spreadsheet at home. And Nora's neighbor Rosa Maldonado doesn't know who is paying the lawyer fighting her deportation.

When federal agents arrive, Nora has to decide what to do about a machine that protects families like Rosa's, has already cost a man his life, and has begun reaching for the town's votes.